Description: This is the third part of my series of connected poems. You can read this on its own and you will find a meaning to it, but to get the full effect, or story I recommend you read the other parts here: http://www.eliteskills.com/z/94097
I still have many more parts to add. Hope you enjoy.
To You (3): Everlasting -------------------------------------------
And so it goes on.
Your friends taunt and geer me.
You can see how vulnerable I am
but you do nothing to help.
Perhaps you enjoy this.
Perhaps I enjoy this,
a few seconds more in your company.
Not enough to fill
the void that has deepened.
Maybe the time is not right
Still it is clear
Maybe next year...
I like this you bring the reader into your world and then leave them hanging on by the last line Maybe next year I have read a couple if not all the parts of this continuing write youve posted I must say I truly like the idea God Bless Ron
Submission Name: To You (3): Everlasting
