Pain and anguish are abound in this piece. I am pulled into a world of lusting misery by this write. I love the images and the screams that not heard still twing in the soul. Loveage, Mike
interesting poem. very short and to the point. the imagery is good and it's not drawn out and tiring.
the only trouble i had was with the first line 'Plunged into a place I cannot emerge' i was looking for the word 'from' at the end. or the word escape instead of emerge. i dont know, it's just me maybe.
besides that it was a cool poem, and i enjoyed reading it.
Submission Name: My Armagedon
