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    dots Submission Name: In Love Again......dots
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    Author: LostInYerTears
    ASL Info:    14/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 85/86/32
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 160
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 925



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       i....dont know


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    dotsIn Love Again......dots
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    all things around me now seem to break
    this pain inside i must always take
    not knowing exactly where to go
    not knowing what i needed to know
    he took my heart turned it black
    took it to a place it cant come back
    my heart has melted and burned away
    yet when i see him i've nothing to say
    i cant believe you did this to me
    obviously my love for you, you couldnt see
    this pain that i have inside
    the pain i can no longer hide
    i thought i loved him i thought he loved me
    but i guess "in love"
    is something we'll never be
    my love is burning for his heart
    but it seems now my love is torn apart
    you promised youd be there always and forever
    but now it seems yer not here ever
    i did love you
    you did love me
    but in love again is something we'll never be




    Submitted on 2006-03-09 17:15:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have seen what I have to say about this poem...but since we are on this site I must congragulate you...or praise u...whatever,it was a great write...sorry I {censored) up your life...but keep up the great writes.
    | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by GuardianAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      the flow was a little choppy but the emotions portrayed in this piece were clear and understandable. this poem is easy to relate to.
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]



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