My Scars -------------------------------------------
my soul hurts from my darkness
consumed by relentless hate
tormented by all my pain
i know now its my fate
i can see the blood drip
from your arm as it drains
back then i wish the blood
came from my veins
so i live without the memory
of your haunting face
i cant believe i stayed
with you in that place
why didnt you use your knife
and just ended it all
so i wouldnt of have
that painful downfall
just cut my chest open
and tear out my heart
took it in your hand
smiled and tore it apart
now my cuts are scars
and i dont regret it
b/c then i thought it was love
but it was just bullshit
those scars remind me
of my tormenting past
and i have new love
and that pain left so fast
wow. This was great. Of course I know the story behind it so I understand it...Im glad that that you found someone like Christa, she's cool. (aj is screaming in my ear right now cuz he cant get any nookie this weekend) :P
Ahhh, at first it was depressing for me. I was started to think it was just going to be another "Depressing teenager" piece. The end was beautiful though!
LOVE IT! I can relate to every single line in your poem! Though I have written a few of these yours seemed more visual! Nicely written keep it up peace & stay safe!
Submission Name: My Scars
