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    dots Submission Name: Rockin' Rain Dancedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 584
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1165



    Description:
       Gobble, gobble, gobble, moo, moo, too!

    Fun with my nature neighbors!

    Happy Friday & Weekend ES!

    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif


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    dotsRockin' Rain Dancedots
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    Homeward bound
    when wild turkeys
    X'd my rainy path

    Travelling through
    green fields - the rain
    a drenching bath

    Intriqued & in no
    particular hurry ~
    I stopped 2 talk with
    the scattering turkey pack

    Yet, all they did was
    gobble & bob
    heads - to, fro & back

    Perhaps, they'd like
    some funky music?
    So I jammed some
    Led Zep & bobbed my
    head then too

    When all the sudden
    the cows were shakin
    rump
    and rap'n in multi-moo

    The wind kicked up
    & danced the rumba -
    so "hot" ~ turning raindrops
    to snow

    I slid out - did a jump up &
    then shook my booty
    low

    A rocking raindance
    @ 1/2 past 5 ~*~

    We rocked so much -
    I let the turkeys drive!

    Dancin all the way
    to my home

    Where friendly creatures
    gather & ALL ARE
    FREE 2 roam




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    ||| Comments |||
      Whoop, heehee
    Just came across this hilarious poem and I would have loved to been there, seen that. Heck, I may have gotten all muddy and joined in you and your animals little dance.
    Thanks for a laugh to brighten my day!!!
    Laughter,
    ~Linda
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I new there was a reason i've always liked turkeys. hard to hate anything that has an appreciation for Jimmy, and the gang. This was i don't know. I have no idea where the hell this came from, it's like; What? but in a good way, this is chill, and now i know so are turkeys
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Who would of thought turkey's and cows like Led Zepplin? lol. This was funny and very upbeat. I can see you shaking your booty out in the rain. lol. I loved the flow and how everything rhymed so well. this made me want to go out and rock! Great job Tiff.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-03-14 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      hey that was great a funny too you have the way of bringing everything to life with your words
    congrats i hope with your future endeavours
    that you mentioned
    hope alls well and thanx for the comments on mission bells

    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      shake that ass my friend and do that dance. turkeys or not i love to dance. funny and imaginitive as is to be expected, u never disappoint. love, joy and signals.
    | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, that scene's going to be set in my mind all day. Seeing YOU and those freaky funny animals jiving with Led Zepplin.
    Like a conga line, it does in fact make one want to get up and join the fun.

    This has to be the longest write I've read of yours. I like it!

    "the cows were shakin rump
    and rap'n in multi-moo" - haha
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well...what can I say ! I would have loved to have seen you, the cows, and the turkeys all boogying way on down.

    This really MOOved me and it certainly was not FOUL !

    Well done Tiffamoomoo.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Creative peice of work! Funny as hell to! I liked how you used symbols and wrote this without a care of ryhming. It was just for fun and I think you accomplished just that! This put a smile on my face! I liked how the cows liked it too, I should try that with my cows!
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by nasuka | [ Reply to This ]
      This was different, but I liked it. You didn't use only words, but symbols (@, 2...ect.) It makes me feel like i should get up and dance, or else make the cows down the road listen to some older rock.

    Nice work, Original, too.
    :)
    Kassandra
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]
      This write had me laughing out loud
    to see the visions in my head you would laugh too
    My God I cant stop laughing!
    LMAO

    This is so cute and creative
    This write is a little different from the writes Im used to from you

    But this is so creative
    I loved IT!

    Please keep me laughing with more like IT in the future
    God Bless
    Ron
    EXCELLENT!
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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