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    dots Submission Name: The Heart/Lovedots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1028
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 739



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       Hmmm...I didn't know I could submit more than one. Well this is a try at Love Poetry. It isn't my style, but I hope you enjoy.


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    dotsThe Heart/Lovedots
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    The heart is odd and wierd
    it can be full of love or full of fear,
    it can take you sky high,
    or put a tear in a lovely eye.

    It can ache, it can break,
    but love it can also make.
    It can make you feel as if you rule,
    it will more than likely make you a fool.

    The heart, like love, is a mystery,
    it's power is something you can't see.
    We all have it, we all want it...
    just to love and be loved a bit.

    So we all have a real heart and true love
    share it with someone and it'll take you home,
    to the sky, past the stars, to a land above
    to a place, with a special someone, you'll never be alone.




    Submitted on 2004-05-03 21:43:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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