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Submission Name: Rainy Day dots

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Author:	nightxassassin
Elite Ratio:	1.98 - 51/43/26
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	186
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Rainy Day dots

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Passing the candy store,
listen to the oceans shore.

Crashing waves,
stony graves.

Pelet on the icy town.

wipe the rain from you'r face,
whith the shining angels grace.

hide inside your warm small house,
another day of rain they say,

As the cloudy sky begins to frown.

Submitted on 2006-03-10 18:38:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  simple and to the point. I like your idea and word usage. The meter was good. Gw, a fun read.

Candale-Switch
| Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by Candale-Switch | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this poem it's short but beautifully written. i like how you chose this form of writing it makes this poem really stand apart from the other ones i've read
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]
  O_O. It is the only face I could possibly make at this. Wonderful peice. I didn't before think a peice this short could be this good. Imagry kept my mind going. The cynicism at the end blew my mind, as the rest sounded very grave and serious. Wonderful write, and keep more coming.
Wishing for more
~Brian
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]
  i love this poem, mainly because rain is my favourite type of weather. only one thing, ocean's should have an apostrophe and at times it seem a little off (the flow) other than that great job
| Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by mysweetsuicide | [ Reply to This ]
  this was a really good write.you broke the ryme which made it even better.i dont usually like "short"poetry but this one is really a good write.well i shall talk to you later.
| Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by LostInYerTears | [ Reply to This ]

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