Interesting choice of a title. It misleads any potential readers, and may turn off some. It is shame that it would do so, however, for this is a very interesting piece of work for sure. There seems to be a small lack of structure in the stanzas. That is not a bad thing, necessarily, but it may get on some people's nerves. The imagery shown in this piece kind of reminds me of those 6 year olds who dream of running away and never coming back, but do at the end of the day, anyway.
Well i liked this poem..it was really good..the title almost stopped me from rreading it though, but i am glad that i did. it was really good. i liked the two line stanzas and how some had rhymne while others did not...its hard to do that but you could. you can keep the title tho. i liked the beginning more than the end..it seemed to run out when you got to the end...but maybe you wanted it to be that way? i dont know. well good luck with everything and keep writing. xoxo me p.s. check out some of my wrok sometime plz