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    dots Submission Name: absencedots

    Author: andnow
    ASL Info:    19.f.wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 136/135/42
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 943
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       i had this one posted before and i dont like it. but i thought i'd repost it just... because.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    He used to live downstairs
    where I kept him in a box.
    A box filled with empty desire,
    and tossed-aside hopes for one romance.

    The only question left on my mind
    the last time I looked in his eyes was,
    “Where has all the enthusiasm gone?”
    And thinking:

    the worst kind of conversations
    stems from imitation of the self

    even the warmest showers taste like ice
    my biggest flaw is im too nice

    im pleading with unknown intentions,
    spirits let me be

    What do you call a holy absence?
    I call it blind optimism.

    Submitted on 2006-03-10 21:27:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it..i'm not so sure what its about but i have my ideas...the flow was nice..your wording i love.

    "even the warmest showers taste like ice"

    That line just hit me hard, it was great...i don't know why you don't like it..i'm glad you reposted it i enjoyed reading this piece..anyhows great work!..keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]

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