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    dots Submission Name: My Final Enddots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 301
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1128



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       Tired.Upset for many reasons.So,I don't know.Let me know what you thing.


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    dotsMy Final Enddots
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    I sit thinking in a nearby chair.
    You could have been but weren't there.
    You were too busy to even care.

    I look around...
    You are nowhere to be found.
    In tears and emotional pain I fall to the ground.

    Chorus:
    Where do you turn...
    When all your friends have gone away?
    As you sit there and burn...
    What are you expected to say?

    Now I'm living life on my own.
    This is more sadness that I have ever shown.
    But you're no longer around so you wouldn't have known.

    Alone is the feeling...
    Now a heart is left unhealing...
    Now I sit around and have no being.

    Chorus:
    Where do you turn...
    When all your friends have gone away?
    As you sit there and burn...
    What are you expeted to say?

    I lay here in the dark...
    Left with your words so stark.
    Dying as I am being torn apart.

    I lost every friend...
    Now I'm done...
    This is my final end.







    Submitted on 2006-03-10 22:52:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I know that my response will sound so cliché to you.

    So I won't even say it.

    Nice poem.
    I absolutely felt it.
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by AnoBaby | [ Reply to This ]



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