Whoever You Want Me To Be by Imadjinn

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Author:	Imadjinn
ASL Info:	17/M/Neverwhere
Elite Ratio:	4.27 - 329/335/139
Words:	121

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	151
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	772

Description:
This I made up out of a difficult situaion with my father. For the rest of you. It's your life, Live it like it's your own. Live every second like it's your last, it may be.

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I'm whoever you want me to be,
I'm me, I'm you, I'm him, I'm she,
I'll pretend, and I'll relate,
but in the end, it's all so fake.

I'm whoever you want me to be,
what you get isn't what you see,
we'll travel along this made up path,
so long as I suffer no one's wrath.

I'm whoever you want me to be,
I will until you set me free,
but that won't happen, no chance in hell,
for never will you bid me farewell,

I'm whoever you want me to be,
and for now I think I agree,
that I'll have no self, have no me,
because I'm whoever you want me to be.

Submitted on 2006-03-11 01:15:50 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey! I like it, I can relate to it so much, my father expect so much from me too, it frustrates me a lot , why can’t they just accept us for who we are . anyway , your poem was good , clear , honest . nice job !
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]
  I hope you don't mind that i added your poem to my favorites list. If you ever want a poem to read just one to comment on you should read some of mine.
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like this poem and i can relate to it alot i wrote a poem about how my father pushed me intoo being so many things that i'm not and i felt like i wasn't even a real person just his little puppet
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]
  i love this piece its wonderful, kinda hard to explain how it is just great, better than any piece i've read in a book, and thats the truth.
its saying (to me) how almost every person on planet earth will change themselves for something mostly someone though. its great!
~Audrey
| Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]

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