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    dots Submission Name: hippopotamusdots
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    Author: WhoAmI?
    ASL Info:    17/m/louisiana
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 3/6/2
    Words: 5
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 1337
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 58



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    hippopotamus
    go hippopotamus go
    hippopotamus




    Submitted on 2006-03-11 01:47:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice haiku, hipopotamuses are cool. not alot to say about it but it made me laugh. i wonder what the next post'll be... just out of curiosity, how did you come up with that???
    | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by sword stalker | [ Reply to This ]
      i didn't like this poem it's very short and it sounds like you don't take writing poems seriously. You should spend a little more time on them and maybe you could write a very interesting poem
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by twotroubledteen | [ Reply to This ]


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