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nice haiku, hipopotamuses are cool. not alot to say about it but it made me laugh. i wonder what the next post'll be... just out of curiosity, how did you come up with that???
i didn't like this poem it's very short and it sounds like you don't take writing poems seriously. You should spend a little more time on them and maybe you could write a very interesting poem
Submission Name: hippopotamus
