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    dots Submission Name: Fiabedots
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    Author: faln_angl
    ASL Info:    25/f/MN
    Elite Ratio:    4.66 - 99/96/17
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 949



    Description:
       Fiabe is Italian for fairytales.


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    dotsFiabedots
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    Your face reflects in my eyes
    like my thousand past lives,
    our spirits too strong
    to be kept apart.
    Your lips recount the moments
    you know by heart onto mine,
    and I will never forget
    the first time.

    Your eyes are familiar
    to my soul.
    Like glaciers melting
    into the sea of my mind,
    they remind me that
    we've danced this dance
    a thousand times before;
    twirling, whirling,
    beneath the stars.

    Feeling heaven's gentle touch,
    intoxicated by the scent of love
    after an early spring rain,
    and the persuasion
    of a blue moon,
    I fall into your arms.

    As our hands clasp
    beneath the northern lights,
    goosebumps race across my skin,
    and I know that
    you and I will always exist
    in the same place as fairytales
    and magic.




    Submitted on 2006-03-11 12:12:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, that was truly beautiful. I can really relate to this one. It reminds me of this reoccuring dream I have. This wright has great wording and a very good flow to it. I can't specifically place any mistakes. I didn't really find any, but I really enjoyed this, and I think I may add it to my favourites! Super shweet job!

    Forever,
    Lilithe
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Lilithe_Aislin | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, that was truly beautiful. I can really relate to this one. It reminds me of this reoccuring dream I have. This wright has great wording and a very good flow to it. I can't specifically place any mistakes. I didn't relly ind any, bu I really enjoyed this, and I think I may add it to my favorites! Super shweet job!

    Forever,
    Lilithe
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Lilithe_Aislin | [ Reply to This ]
      You have quite a way with my heart with your poetry. I think you definitely wrote something "substantial" today. I was thinking about writing a poem with this same title after you texted me the word. I would not have been able to do the title as much justice as you have. Yet again you leave me speechless. I have much more that I want to say, but I'm not going to post it on the comments section.

    Yours,
    Corey
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Ravenwood | [ Reply to This ]



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