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    dots Submission Name: holocaustdots

    Author: Brigit
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 14/14/4
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       this poem is about the holocaust mostly but i guess im just kind of venting because i hate the way people were treated

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    how could you do it
    murdering a child after looking in her eyes
    what did she do
    was she racially, religiously, or politically indifferent to you
    kicking a woman like a flea bitten dog
    drowning whole families in a poisonous smog
    throwing their bodies into hot flames
    all because they have a different name
    killing a man because of the life he was born in
    how could you believe this isn't a sin
    saying you do this in the name of god
    any god that allows this is a complete fraud
    stuffing them all in crates like cattle
    all for this fucking religious battle
    killing millions in cold blood
    how many tears do they have to shed
    don't you care, don't you see
    how evil do you have to be
    what the hell is wrong with you
    don't you feel bad
    how could you do this without going mad

    Submitted on 2006-03-11 15:46:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it. You have a good way of putting your feelings out there. I really feel your anger. My veiw on life is probably different from yours. I don't want to offend anyone but I don't care as long as it doesn't affect me. This poem did, however, make me angry at hitler for what he did. Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by dude90998 | [ Reply to This ]
      I too agree the anger you feel about the holocaust really travels thru your writes
    I too have the same anger for ALL the races and people who were affected by the insane mind of Adolf Hitler and his fellow nazis
    I will certainly be looking for more of your writes
    God Bless
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! All I want to say is amazing the portrayal of the affected was great. I love your flow of words. Great job. Thank you for writing it.
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by bbcakes1115 | [ Reply to This ]

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