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    dots Submission Name: Life on This Planetdots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 166
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    Description:
       On a world Imperfect.


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    dotsLife on This Planetdots
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    Life on this Planet

    Life on this planet is never
    Easy. It involves reaching
    For things you do not want.
    It involves keeping alive
    That which you would just as
    As soon see die. Even more
    Frightening it involves
    Killing that which may deserve
    Living. It involves a lot of
    Running and fretting just
    For the sake of running and
    Fretting. One day you wake up
    And realize it’s never going
    To get better. Then suddenly
    It gets much better and you
    Realize you can reach for what
    You want and it is no longer there.

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    Submitted on 2006-03-12 03:33:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great depiction of life. i liked the line "it involves alot of running and fretting for the sake of running and fretting" it sounded like some thing one of my friends would say... this was all around good except for it was a bit confusing (even though i have no room to talk). good job and keep it up.
    -kiddow
    | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by the nerdbomb | [ Reply to This ]



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