I'm sorry... by GuardianAngel

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Author:	GuardianAngel
ASL Info:	16 m fl
Elite Ratio:	3.15 - 46/63/20
Words:	144

Class/Type:	Poetry/Sorry
Total Views:	216
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	920

Description:
I really don't care what your comments are...they can't help nor can they hurt me...so leave whatever you wish,this isn't meant for you but for her.......she knows who she is.

I'm sorry... dots

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If only she could see
that all that has happened
is because of me
I hurt her everyday
whether I said I love you
or I just had nothing to say,
I tried to be there
but I guess I tried too hard
it's my curse that I care...

If someday we fall in "love" again
I hope you will see
that all that has happened
wasn't for me,
I loved you
but I never forgot
the night you said,
I love you too....

Every second of everyday
I wish things could go back
to the way they were
and we wouldn't have to suffer
for the mistakes we made,
but now I see
that it wasn't you
but me...

I tried too hard
and now I have nothing,
it's my fault I can't be with you.......
I'm sorry.

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  I really liked this poem, it showed almost the perfect amount of emotion and i love the transactions! It kinda reminds me of my & my boyfriend! keep writing =]

in xO love <3
| Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by iN xO Love | [ Reply to This ]
  wow leo this was quite a good write.who ever this was writen for must mean alot to you.but have you ever thought that maybe just maybe it wasnt yer fault and it was hers.that maybe everything she did added up to what you had to do?then it wouldnt be yer fault at all it'd be hers for doing what she did.and causing you to give her what she deserved.anyway this was a great write keep it up
| Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by LostInYerTears | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice write, this poem shows you as a strong man even if your not. Sometimes things just ain't ment to be, I don't know who I feel bad for, you or the girl, But this was written clear and understandable, I can't say nothings wrong, keep up the good work!

Singlerose:)
| Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice man. You don't see to many men who are able to express their feelings. Whether good or bad. I also like the way you admit its your fault. Both sexes could learn from that. Very good poem, keep it up. I wish you the best with her...
| Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by Boogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
  awww this is so sweet and sad.I really liked it.
Im gonna add it to my favorites.I wish guys would take the time more often and write girls poems.Its really sweet when they do.you have alot of potential as a poet.Great job!And im sure whoever this was to they really liked it.
| Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by suicidal_chick | [ Reply to This ]

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