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    dots Submission Name: the sourcedots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1136
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1670



    Description:
       first solo post


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    dotsthe sourcedots
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    this is my introduction for destruction
    my mind cant function wit out the corruption
    I feed off negitivity payin the price for over consumption,I came in on sinceers shadows,a hook or a chorus a guest appearance underestimated as a real lyricist your delirious if you think you got the clearance to mirror this
    you havent seen what ive seen never stepped foot where i walk
    dont know what it means to hold on to dreams so feel me when i talk
    im speakin on behalf of throw away children let my words be heard wit the strength of 9 million
    the voice of a movement thats far from useless im prepared to lost it unarmed but ready to use it,dont refuse it,ill go 6 feet deep for this music,let the public unplug my mic ill go acoustic
    this is the first of many,pen to the pad wit a thirst for remy -your worst enemy
    spit a verse at plenty till you rezent me fuckin rip you till my pen is empty
    im here to make a statement in every sentance-relentless even your best couldnt contend wit this
    so bring ya battle ill clap ya knot your NOT scarface you dont +rap-a-lot+ you just lack a lot
    im not doin this for my "block" or my "zip code" im just here to rip hoes wit slick flows im sick tho
    the best kept secret in the industry you fall short at attempts to get rid of me lyricaly you cant spit at me
    easily frequently i run threw emcees equaly so stop thinkin secretly your beating me cuz theres no way of defeating me,thats just how life gets its all +guns and roses+ so remain ya self stop tryin to keep up with the jonses








    Submitted on 2006-03-13 18:39:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey bubz,
    im glad sin introduced you onto this site, you may have bin a throw away child, but damn u got skill, im luvin it.
    keep em cumin,
    ill be checkin ur other work when you have submited it.
    kyrenia
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      yo this [censored] was ill. it still seemed kinda like u were battling even though it was a solo post. u just got that aggressive ass flow that says "i am not to be [censored]ed with". it seemed like u were pretty much challenging the whole world and u were determined not to lose. this [censored] was so tight,.
    | Posted on 2006-03-18 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Your first post was serious...
    "but ready to use it,dont refuse it,ill go 6 feet deep for this music,let the public unplug my mic ill go acoustic"
    Love for this game is all we got. Ha.

    Use spell check once in a while, unless you like that raw feel your misspelled words give.

    "you havent seen what ive seen never stepped foot where i walk
    dont know what it means to hold on to dreams so feel me when i talk"
    i fuq wit these lines too. They carry a serious tone.
    The throw away children line was deep.

    Keep it up
    Bitch
    SINceerly
    SIn
    | Posted on 2006-03-14 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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