best friends

Author: Kaila Turley ASL Info:    15/F Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 52 /43 /18 Words: 104

Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship Total Views: 860 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 620

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best friends

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Best Friends I remember all the good times, The things we shared, the times we cried. I remember all the fun times, We laughed so hard we thought we'd die. We shared so much together, Memories engraved in my mind. Everything about you, Will not be lost in time. I love you so dearly, I wish that you could see. No words could ever describe, How much you mean to me. Remember that I'm here for you, And will be till the end. I love you more than anything, You're truly my best friend.

Submitted on 2006-03-15 10:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This was good I could tell that it is an older one that you got from a previous write, but it had good flow again it did have rhymes but it kinda made it a better flow. The idea was kinda Cliche but it is hard now a days for something not be be cliché, but friends are some of your most important things in life and some people take them for granted, but you don't and that's good keep writing kaila your are improve so much xoxo =Logan=

| Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]

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