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    dots Submission Name: friendsdots
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    Author: Kaila Turley
    ASL Info:    15/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 52/43/18
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsfriendsdots
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    I was sitting here thinking
    of the words I want to say,
    but they just wouldn't come out right-
    so I found a different way.

    I got a piece of paper
    and I wrote this poem for you,
    but there's no way to thank you
    for everything you do.

    For always being nice to me
    and staying by my side,
    for helping fix my problems
    and never leaving me behind.

    For accepting my thoughts and feelings,
    though you do not understand,
    for never giving up on me
    and being my best friend.

    For making me laugh-
    and letting me cry
    and saying you'd miss me
    if I were to die.

    Everything you mean to me
    you could never know.
    In all the ways you've changed my life
    I could never show.

    The way you take care of me,
    (you're my shining star)
    and though it's so incredible
    that's just the way you are.

    Before I get too mushy
    it's time for me to go,
    but before I leave this ink-filled page
    there's one thing you should know.

    As long as we are living,
    no matter when or where,
    if you ever need me-
    just call and I'll be there.

    I'll climb a thousand mountains
    and swim a thousand seas...
    anything to be there
    'cause you've been there for me.






    Submitted on 2006-03-15 11:55:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was great... and once again i can totally relate to it... you sound like your describing the relationship i have with one of my best friends, you tok the words right out of my life...
    this poem was well worded, and the flow and rhythm was perfect, no criticism for this one... well done
    keep up the great work

    ~hannah~
    | Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by seriouscutter19 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, i've been reading all the poems you have posted on here, and this is my favorite by far! it's worded beautifully and the ryhthm is perfect all the way through--great job
    ttyl
    luv ya--be safe--keep smilin
    *Chels*
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by .:Chelsea:. | [ Reply to This ]
      this was beautiful ..a very good poem with a heart felt words ....yes it can be more deep with some images ..but then again it was a very beautiful poem
    | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very good it is still obviously a old poem cause it did lack a little in the flow department, and it was pretty cliché, but it's good to write things for your friend. I do a whole lot better writing stuff down then I'dever be able to say myself, and it kinda scared me that you said " You say you'd miss me if I were ot die" It's scary to think that you've thought that no one would miss you if you'd die cause you'd be surprised that there are so many people out there that care for you. I'm here for ya too if you ever need me keep it up Kawa love ya lady
    xoxo
    =Logan=
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]



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