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    dots Submission Name: So Much Imperfectiondots
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    Author: KelseyJo
    ASL Info:    14/F/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 15/13/12
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Rant/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 157
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 891



    Description:
       I just feel this way sometimes. Wanted to get it all out, I guess.


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    dotsSo Much Imperfectiondots
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    I laugh in your face,
    when you tell me to act normal.
    I spit at your feet,
    when you try to change me.
    I glare at you coldly,
    when you try to talk to me.
    So sorry I'm not perfect.
    I roll my eyes,
    when you act all hurt.
    I ignore you,
    when you start to rant.
    I sleep,
    when you start to cry.
    So sorry I'm not perfect.
    I look the other way,
    when you try to make me feel guilty.
    I walk away,
    to get away from your frusteration.
    I toss my long hair,
    to prove I'm oblivious.
    So sorry I'm not perfect.
    I don't change,
    no matter how much you want it.
    I don't care,
    no matter how much you do.
    I'm satisfied,
    no matter how unhappy you are.
    So sorry I'm not perfect.




    Submitted on 2006-03-15 12:04:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked the poem but i think you could put spaces between the stanza's more people would read it that way. and where you write "so sorry i am not perfect" you should just write "sorry i am not perfect" anyway good rite and i enjoyed reading this .
    | Posted on 2006-03-18 00:00:00 | by darkestlight | [ Reply to This ]
      I remember being a teen... getting into a bunch of trouble, and doing all these same things. but looking back on everything now, now matter how much i hated people back then, and thought i knew everything, i wish i would have listened to all the people who tried to tell me i was messing up. heed the warnings little one... you've only got one life... and contrairy to beliefe... only one REAL chance...
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by Poetic | [ Reply to This ]



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