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    dots Submission Name: Cleardots
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    Author: deepinthought
    ASL Info:    24, F, Shaw AFB, SC
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 72/96/19
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 162
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 509



    Description:
       Just a bit of rambling I suppose.. Not really looking for much feedback, just throwing it out to see if anyone can relate. I've hit a bit of writer's block lately and I'm trying to write through it.


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    dotsCleardots
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    Odd…
    My head is void of thought
    (Except perhaps the thought that I’m thinking nothing)
    I’m blank..a white canvas
    My favorite color is clear.
    I could reach for brilliant colors and paint the inside of my head
    But why?
    Is there truly a point to my ramblings or are they just that
    Vapidity..is that even a word really?
    I’ll pretend it is
    Since it pretty well describes my state of thought right now.
    I’m just blank
    Odd….




    Submitted on 2006-03-15 13:01:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the thought of your mind being a white canvas and your favorite color being clear, really creative thinking...over all i didn't care for the lack of form though...but don't get me wrong it was good...
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      loved it, freakin loved it...that might be one of the best items I have read on here...really cool...there is a flavour in this that is so simple but so hard ot figure out...keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by goveiac | [ Reply to This ]
      I used to worry that what if I just couldn't write anymore or if I couldn't express "IT" - now I understand the down times are oft for self-reflection or introspection - good time to re-read your older stuff or random pieces and allow your mind a break. Take advantage of this detachment, of sorts, & perhaps you will find inspiration in a place you never thought
    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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