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    dots Submission Name: hello bushdots
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    Author: century
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 3/6/4
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 696
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       think what you want. i very openidenet.this website is for us and us only.


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    dotshello bushdots
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    bush,this goverment is drowning
    these words you speak
    redsounding
    what's that, peace for the weak?

    i feel theres a difference
    there hope to make
    you more like a mence
    not so much love to take

    so listen up
    you listen good bush.
    stop the viloence
    don't push!




    Submitted on 2006-03-15 19:04:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      down wid bush!!!!!

    oh and blaire.....my president. he sucks too
    | Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by ellesmera | [ Reply to This ]
      hm,i don't exactly know what it is you meant but this sounded with anger,blame or something of some sort..i think the rhyming's nice though.tkecre!^_^
    | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]


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