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    dots Submission Name: A tiger named Tonydots
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    Author: Jodans
    ASL Info:    25/M/Vancouver, WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 34/38/9
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 852



    Description:
       Just a quick little thing that popped into my mind.
    Completely because of a comment left by Swanne.
    After she read Silly Rabbit.


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    dotsA tiger named Tonydots
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    Tony my friend
    A tiger so strong
    Did anyone even notice
    Something was wrong?

    Your stripes were so bright
    Orange and black
    But nobody knows
    What you did out back

    I know the truth
    And here I will say
    Exactly what I saw
    That Summers day

    From behind your back
    You pulled a blue box
    Set it down gently
    Then checked all the locks

    Yes, I was watching
    As you prepared to show
    Preparing for the commercial
    With a bag of blow

    You frosted your flakes
    But not like mine
    With your razorblade
    You made a line

    You closed your eyes
    As your cereal you ate
    Then snorted your coke
    And yelled, "Thats GGGGRRRREEEEAAAATTTT!!!"




    Submitted on 2006-03-16 03:42:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      haha! nice one! i like tony the tiger! very nice and light! keep it up!
    please read some of work and tell me what u think
    cheers
    Mihir
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by mihir | [ Reply to This ]
      very very interesting look at tony. you do know that now i'll never be able to see one of those commercials again without thinking about this piece. and thats good...left an imprint, and a good one at that. bravo! enjoyable and fun! : )

    "they're more than good! they're grrrrrrrreat!"
    take care
    birdy
    | Posted on 2006-03-17 00:00:00 | by birdy5005 | [ Reply to This ]
      hahaha...
    this was witty....
    I always new that something was up...he was always so happy...but I just thought it was the sugar, man...was I wrong…we should have seen the warning signs!
    ok...I'm honored that I inspired this poem from you...
    I'd just like to set the record straight...
    I'm not a coke head...I was just tired
    (Just jk with you)
    this falls under the same black humor as the silly rabbit did...
    its smart and funny...
    and the rhymes and flow are flawless
    I wouldn't change a thing

    ps. this is the first poem I have ever inspired...
    I am so proud.. although I always pictured it different

    love, Swanne
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't tell you how funny I thought this was.. Hilarious, Grim and cute at the same time.. I really, really liked this, Sorry to not have some grrreeeaaattt word of wisdom here...
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]
      HA! This was GRRRRRRRRRR8! I always knew that tiger had something going on! Heck, all celebrities have their vices! To Tony's is coke, eh? Did you sell this info to the Enquirer? Maybe you can bribe that tiger and get a cut on his action? Who knows, maybe you will get frosted flakes for life, HA!
    Very funny and very good stuff.
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      You frosted your flakes... Now that's greeeeeaaaat! This was very funny, but where on earth did you get the idea of putting Tony the Tiger on blow? It's very interesting...
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      This gave me a good chuckle. Nice play on the 'frostied' thing. The guy that did his voice just died, BTW.

    Peace,

    Joe
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]



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