this was sick. it has sweet imagery and such an innocent playfullness to it with out it being childlike. The picture deffinately sets the mood for the reader. the only thing i could think to add is maybe a part 2, so to speak about the angels actually playing, this was tight, thanx for a great read
I loved this one, very dreamy.It had a nice feel to it.
One little thingl.... I hate the text language, replacing 'to' with 2, just (for me) cheapened what was a beautiful write... but thats a personal thing, i love language and do think it's getting ruined with all this text slang.
I've always loved the originality of your pieces. They are so different, it's refreshing to read your unorthodox structure that just works so well with what you are writing. This was very cute, it sounded so peaceful, heavenly. This is definitely a favorite. ...bb...
This is indeed a bright and uplifting poem to start my day with. It reads so smoothly and peaceful. You did great with this one. Angels playing, the sky crooning.. Yeah.. if I had wings (and maybe we all do in a way) I'd unfurl them and stay a while.. up the street, by the pond, where angels play.
This one is beautiful You captured that beautiful fereling one gets when they have a personal relationship with God and worded it brilliantly in write This is probably the best poem Ive read of yours Very Beautiful! God Bless Ron
nice pic you posted thanx for the characters and the pics in comments its to bad they took abbot and costello off tv i like your post something i dont think of much **angels ** i think i will stay playing in the devils fire seems to me is where i spent most of my life anywaz great poem and hope all is well
Wow! I love this, it was like a dream of some sort. The imagery and flow was just so great. I love the way you made heaven and the angels seem so attainable. I loved this so much. It had a child like feel to this, full of wonder and beauty. Great job Tiff!