The Year of the 666
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I wrote this seeing as this is indeed the Year of the 666. This June 6th. Im not really religious so I am really not sure why Im writing crap like this. I do love this though it makes you think if you'll be here tomorrow or you won't. So please tell me how did I do on this poem
The Year of the 666
Some fear this day They say an antichrist is on his way Fear of the Devil is in the air But I don't care Priests run about Trying to get the message out That its a cursed day The devil is out to play People are in complete chaos and destruction Building his army for the day When the Apocalypse is only minutes away Now the world is completely filled with fear But the world has payed their fare With sins from bad to worse But Death's course Won't be as simple For it drives you farther from the temple Rioting mobs, angry at each other Blaming one another, but won't even bother To look at themselves and say I am the one to blame, but it doesn't go that way Hell is getting full But everyone just wants to be cool So if you'll just excuse me I'll gladly hand you the key So you can open the door and build a new and better life Caring for your husband or wife Caring what happens and if tomorrow never comes Then you won't regret it and everyone welcomes That day When the Apocalypse is only minutes away |
Submitted on 2006-03-16 13:42:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I read this and yes, it is a better poem. And you say that you have no concrete belief which to me, enforces the idea more strongly. I don't know, maybe you are just writing to vent. In which case, my comments don't realy apply to you. Because when you write to escape you really need no comment, nor any grounds for improvment. But when you have purpose...as in, you are writing for a specific audience or maybe to express a point of view, I will be happy to comment again. I do like you, don't think that I mean to offend.| | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ] | I like the message you have written about in this poem. The world is getting worse everyday, and I agree that we will have to stand up and be held accountable for what we have done with our lives. I believe 666 is going to be across the anti-christs forehead. | | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by etherealforu | [ Reply to This ] | |
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