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    dots Submission Name: When Things Dissolvedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhen Things Dissolvedots
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    When things dissolve into emotion
    and lose their solid form,
    becoming part of the mind, the soul,
    they become real.





    Submitted on 2004-01-20 13:00:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i disagree that this is a start or a finale...

    this is complete...in so few words it says as much as it wants to...

    the dissolving into the mind and soul to become real...

    i like the first two lines...i think of how we are brought to tears by emotion..tears representing that reality of feeling...
    beautifully worded.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-29 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Still lovin' it hon! Don't know why I didn't fave list this the first time I read it, but I'm going to now! <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      This is neat! I like the oppositions...
    | Posted on 2004-01-21 00:00:00 | by hopefloats | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it just the way it is, but it is one of those "capsules" that may be just a begining..or perhaps a summary/finale in a later piece
    | Posted on 2004-01-20 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      deep meaning! like it.. seems a little short.. is there gonna be a part 2? can't wait to find out!
    | Posted on 2004-01-20 00:00:00 | by drkpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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