i like this sometimes i wish i can do this especially w/ my b/f b/c sometiems he lieks to close up and not tell me what hes feelign and i make him do it anyways i would jsut loveto travel around his mind and never find my way out b/c hes such a complex person that he amazes me sometimes, but anywho, let me quit going on about him lol, great write!
Hmm...well now, this is an interesting concept, and i think one step into the mind of this likkle itty bitty brain of mine, might just be a bit to flashy and twirly and strange for you to comprehend...and if you reached my "Wolfy image" section, well you'd wanna leave. RIGHT now. ::shudders:: man, dredge up old memories on me...sheesh. Then again, it brings up good ones too...damn girl, you make me think to much!!! ::twitches:: novertheless, excellent write.
the idea of brains being a gray maze is a little gross, but i guess your talking more about thoughts, not the actual organ. sometimes people do confusing things and sometimes people are just confused, and this poem conveys it.