Description: ever had that one guy/girl that played hard to get or was so confusing it drived you madd?
well this poem i made when i was with my ex last year.anyway tell me what you think...
Mind Games -------------------------------------------
I Hate You
I Love You
which one
can decide
confused?
so am i
i want to live
i want to die
i want to part
i want to cry
i move to slow
i move to fast
make up yer mind
forget the past
im too mature
im too immature
wich one
hurry decide
cant choose?
tis be fine
you cant make up yer mind
neither can i
our relationship may not survive
if you love me you'll understand
i need you to make up yer mind
if you cant
this may be our last good-bye
this poem was pretty good because the flow was very steady...also the contrast between lines made it more interesting to right (ie: i hate you, i love you). although many poems that are about guy/girl relationships make me groan because of all the drama that tends to go along with that sort, this one didn't because it wasn't exaggerated and "the world is gonna end because i'm in a bad relationshipish".
Submission Name: Mind Games
