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    dots Submission Name: Is you readydots
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    Author: dawn_voluptre23
    ASL Info:    18-Female-N.C. A&T
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 20/25/8
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 175
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 925



    Description:
       I was lstnin' to Nas (the realest MC out there) "One Mic" when I wrote this. I started thinkin about all the young brothas bangin. With the goal of bein a O.G. (Origional Gangsta). And to me if you bang then its all good i aint no snitch or hater. Just think about all the people that are affected by your choices. And make sure you ready for the things that lie ahead cuz if you live by the sword then you die by the sword. So bang if you bang.


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    Nigga is you ready to die?!!
    Cold in the ground rotting you lie
    Bullets flyin' wit no name
    No time
    No mind
    No game
    You go shoot his cru
    They come shoot you
    Steel swords wit a trigga
    One sling is al you need to take dis nigga
    But the little girl in the house
    Wit her little girl braids
    Taken away
    A mother holdin' her dead child
    Wanderin' why
    It was her baby that had to die
    Errybody gotta go dome time
    Right?!!
    And sense you got to
    It’s gone be like you want it to be
    You leavin’ like a real O.G.
    Yo glock in yo hand
    Yo dick in yo pants
    From the cops you run
    Why you think O.G.'s are so young
    The same direction you head
    Ether in jail
    Or Dead
    So Im'a ask you again nigga is you ready to die??




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      Knowing this situation all too well I think it could've been done a different way with the wordin' to make it appeal to more people but it was good I understood where you were coming from I don't know how much emotion you put into it or atleast I didnt feel it. You don't wanna be a "snitch" but I get the feelin' that from a one-sided prospective it can be taken differently. They gang bang mostly from lost of identity and when you find a group of people who you care for then why not do everything you can to be down with them? They live by the gun and die by the gun but in their hearts they know the truth, sometimes Hammurabi's code comes into play. And the innocent that get hurt well we all go at one point or another just some leave in a gruesome way than others. So I ask you mah aggie sista are ready to tell them that you actually care if they die?
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by Dutchess_aira | [ Reply to This ]



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