This is awesome... I really like the fact that throughout the poem you have no idea what the connection between the poem and the title is, but then bang in one line you reveal the connection and it doesn't interrupt the poem at all. I usually don't like choppy poems, but you wrote it in a way that it flows very well. Great write!!
I thought( that) should of been placed between the words agreed and this an the of takin out in the line They had agreed of this lovely child, but then that is just my take on this other then that I really felt this is a wonderful write and well worth the read,please keep up the wonderful writes am looking forword to reading more of your stuff adnil
Wow . I read it twice because i wanted to make sure it was as good as I thought the first time. It is something that I would read from a well known writer. As the above were stating the last line is incredible and I can't wait to read more. good Job.
This is deffinately a cute poem. It was quick and happy and made me smile. It was sort of hummorus thinking about when the baby is born and the angels take one look at it and assign what it's going to be. You did a great job! This was a very enjoyable write.
Absolutely lovely. I was going along in a trance.. up until this line "They had agreed of this lovely child…" and the last line, "This one should be a dancer!"... Maybe you could change them up a bit?. Otherwise, I think you did a great job with the rest of the write. You have talent. It shows.