I like it. Most short poems are just lacking a certain amount of description, but this works beautifully. Short and sweet. I really like it. I enjoy the comparison of sleep and a play. Quite good. I hope to read more of yours.
aww so sweet. how beautiful your words are. a saying that could be passed from mother to child for many generations to come. your night time saying could never seem dull even when repeated every night. as reading this piece i felt the warmth and deep love you had. thanks for sharing.
wow a very sweet lullaby i like yoru wors they are very sweet.. well keep writing .. and i cant say amny negative becuase those words came from your heart... spo keep writing and if you have a chance please take a lookk to my wriitngs.. peace and love take care and have a ncie day Victor