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    dots Submission Name: Desiredots
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    Author: mandyshay07
    ASL Info:    17/f/kentucky yall!
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 119/121/32
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 556
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this awhile ago for a guy i broke up with about two months ago.. He didn't really care much about it but I found it in my stuff and thought I'd see what other people thought..comment away! lol


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    dotsDesiredots
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    I grasp the sweet bliss of this treasured desire.
    My yearning to be with you each day..
    oh the torment this spirit knows..

    your strong arms envelop me, drawing me close
    My entire being is filled with a delicious fire
    Burning scarlet, sapphire...livid white.

    i feel your soft breath on my cheek
    my heart races and my breath comes quickly
    as you pull me ever closer to you

    Your smile, your laughter, your passion..
    No words are fit to describe the beauty i see.
    If only I could gaze into your eyes forever...




    Submitted on 2004-05-04 15:26:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you're not 15. more like you're a crazy way older lier. It's a good poem. I'm curious if you were able to write that before you started coming to this site.
    | Posted on 2004-05-04 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      great images in this... it seems to be so sweet. i wonder why this ex didn't care for it to much... i'm sure anyone who this was written for would be flattered. (P.S.: Isn't it just great to find something forgotten and remember it all??)
    -dandan
    | Posted on 2004-05-04 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]



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