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    dots Submission Name: Shed tearsdots
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    Author: nosferotu_gurl
    ASL Info:    24/female/wa
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 140/165/67
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Really dont know....just fell out when I was stoned.read and comment.


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    dotsShed tearsdots
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    Scared of the world
    And whatís yet to come
    My fears bottled up
    And thatís what Iíve become
    A person with problems
    With no where to turn
    A scared little girl
    With so much to learn
    A broken soul
    With so many fears
    Its hard to tell the difference
    Between all the tears
    Am I crying for love
    Or am I crying for hate
    Am I crying for a reason
    Or just to debate
    All the tears burn
    Yet I donít understand
    Why my life is like this
    If I meet no demand
    Is my life just a dream
    That will all go away
    Will my problems all flee
    When I wake up one day
    I want to wake up
    And I want no fears
    I donít want to remember
    All my shed tears




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