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    dots Submission Name: songs of leavesdots
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    Author: auntwheezie
    ASL Info:    45/Female/Dartmouth NS
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 75/57/18
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotssongs of leavesdots
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    music in the air
    flitting from tree to tree
    songs of danger and wonder
    in different tones and melodies
    deep, raucous calls from the jays
    airy chirps from the tiny sparrows
    throaty calls from the crows above
    each with a story to tell
    trees sing in harmony
    with their feathered occupants song




    Submitted on 2006-03-18 21:18:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the visual as well as the audible in this work . I can hear the brids in the trees that you show. I can also see the tree in the form. I read this aloud and it flows well. Good work. Lynn
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this was cute. I like the way you described the birds songs and made it audible to the readers. I think you did a great job with also keeping your flow steady and also the theme constant. A airy and cheerful read.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-03-18 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah,spring is in the air somewhere,just wished it was here ha,Lovely poems its got a feel good feeling to it really enjoyed the read
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-03-18 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]



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