I feel really emotionally right now and this didn't make it me feel any better! haha I enjoyed this write. I felt the longing to hold onto that something or someone...I felt it. The format for this piece works really well. I love the "hold on/so tight/blue skin/turns white" opening. It caught my attention and held it through the entire piece. "I just want one more spiral to ride" was a good line as well. I felt the desperateness of wanting to life live to your fullest in this...goodness, this is my third fav of the night. Great job. I haven't been able to find inspirational pieces like this in a long time...thank you. Take care.
Submission Name: Delusional Definition
