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    dots Submission Name: The anger withindots
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    Author: Grim_Reaper
    ASL Info:    15
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/2/1
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1324



    Description:
       Just a way for me to vent all my frustrations and anger at one of my friends and parents....


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    dotsThe anger withindots
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    The world falling apart
    The hate consuming all
    No one can escape its destruction
    You can not run
    You can not hide
    It will find you
    And turn you into
    Something else
    No one can help you
    Everything you do is
    Out of hate
    Revenge is your motto
    You don’t know how to love
    You lost that ability
    When no one would love you
    You love no one
    No one loves you
    Why is it so hard
    To see that people
    Care
    Everyone said they had
    Your beset interests at
    Heart
    They said you need to
    See professional help
    But you said you didn’t
    Need help
    No one would listen
    So you ran away
    You ran away from
    The people who cared
    You now live in the streets
    Poor and helpless
    Always wondering why
    You didn’t kill yourself
    Right before you did it
    Something in your cold heart
    Said no
    It has always confused
    You
    No matter how many
    Times you tried
    Something in your
    Heart said no
    Maybe someone is
    Watching over you
    You shall never know
    You shall never know what
    The world has to challange you
    With




    Submitted on 2006-03-19 01:38:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think with a little work this could be a top class piece of writing, lacking a little feeling but you can still feel the frustration coming through.
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by Mr R | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice..I think that if you add a little more feeling into it that it would be amazing
    origanal yes but only by the words..
    I liked it I related to it very well
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by Desire_Within | [ Reply to This ]



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