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    dots Submission Name: Self-Reliancedots
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    Author: DontSaveMySoul
    ASL Info:    20/m/cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 194/184/42
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 179
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    dotsSelf-Reliancedots
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    Of all the beauty in the world
    Nothing will ever match
    Or even come close to compare
    The glory of self reliance

    Nothing she offered in love
    Couldn't be had elsewhere
    I could do for myself
    Any act she proformed

    I was always more concerned
    I was always more passionate
    and yet, I was Always wrong
    Though she was never right

    Enough!

    And never again!
    I shall NOT forget who I am
    Nor how important I am
    Nor howmuch I love me

    It is not how much I can love
    It will be what I will be given
    I Will be acknowleged for what I am
    I will not feel shame for pride




    Submitted on 2006-03-19 01:51:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      How you put the word "enough" in the middle made for a good long pause for the reader. It stands out and works well with this piece. I don't usually see that in poetry, it flowed very nicely with the rest of the writing. Hope to see more from you soon. Have a wonderful day. :) Amber
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by amber_in_wyomin | [ Reply to This ]



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