I love how the poem just flows right off the tongue. sad, but that's love! you know what you're talking about. do you still know the girl, if not, you should find her. Things may still work-out. unless im reading to deep into this, idk. this could just be a poem about nothing (i hope its not). anyway, peace
Great short, sweet poem. A bit sad, when you think of someone leaving that you love so much. I really like the second stanza, it kind of gives the poem the feeling of...well august and love mixed together. Pretty good flow. Nice job inkpen
I really like this poem short an very sweet it kind of leaves the heart wantin more of what u remember an what you will come to remember good write :) dd