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    dots Submission Name: My foreverdots
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    Author: atonement
    Elite Ratio:    2.71 - 106/186/98
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Another poem about Adam. I was thinking about it last night. I was sitting on his couch crying and we just talked. He held me and told me it was alright


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    You're so intoxicating, the last drink that realses me from the world. You're my high, I'm an addict to you, my deadly drug. My kerosine lips, strike up another match when we kiss. Infero of passion. You're my identy, in a time of crisis. You're my midnight lover, mysterious dream, was it all real or just a dream? You're my cold crisp air, you're my raindrops that hide my tear stained face. You're my thoughts, you're my wings of freedom in a time of dispare. You're my heart that I use to love you. You're my star light sky, if the darkness of the night. Your my forever




    Submitted on 2006-03-19 13:21:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You know.. just like you said another love poem baiscally, but the way you write it always adds some orignal taste. But please try poem form for me....
    | Posted on 2006-04-02 00:00:00 | by Evil Jesture | [ Reply to This ]


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