Description: ...I think it's self explanitory, and if it isn't, oh well.
I'll push it away...for you -------------------------------------------
I know I can stop the pain
if I force it all away...
...I'll just push it all away
I know I can be happy
if thats how I make it seem...
...I'll just pretend that I'm happy
I know everything will be fine
if I say that its okay...
...I swear that it's okay
and I know that you'll stay mine
if I do whatever you please...
...even though she's killing me
I promise I won't cry...
...in front of of you
I promise I won't lie...
...and get caught
I swear I'll be alright...
...if you want me to be
I swear I'll stand next to you with a smile...
...as long as I dont have to mean it
I know I can stop the pain
if I force it all away...
...I'll just push it all away
very nice. well written and a good message that i think people can relate to...it's a connection. keep writing! the only bad thing is that maybe you should make it longer. of course that's a worthless comment if that's all you had to say. in that case, ignore me. but if you're holding back, maybe try to add more. put your soul in it
hi there...i think the subject u have chosen to write about makes a lot of sense, especially in today's world. The whole thing of putting up pretences just so that people accept u is , i believe, an evil. You try to be what u arent just to please others, and ur identity takes a backseat! The sense if individuality is not there anymore... good work... please read some of my work and tell me what u think! Cheers mihir
It's pretty hard to "sell" a lyric as a written word, as without the music, most songs don't have a leg to stand on.
Your work is structurally sound, and I'd love to hear the music that goes with it. Poetically, think of Bernie Taupin. He wrote a beautiful set of lines, and Elton John put music that made them even more wonderful.
Submission Name: I'll push it away...for you
