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    dots Submission Name: disguised as a love slavedots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 398
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    dotsdisguised as a love slavedots
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    so mixed up about something
    feel so lost without a right thought
    first my head thinks it could be this
    but then my mouth starts to speak
    not so sure not so sure
    about this secret love thing

    chorus:
    so confused so so down
    doesn't seem to be right
    can't put my finger on it
    can't even start up again
    so confused so so down
    whatever happened to me?
    that's what I'm wondering

    choices are hard
    when it means so much to give up
    maybe, don't want to lose it all
    live it so hard love it anyway
    tried to quit this love
    but it won't let me
    no not winning

    chorus:
    so confused so so down
    doesn't seem to be right
    can't put my finger on it
    can't even start up again
    so confused so so down
    whatever happened to me?
    that's what i'm wondering


    tumble over all these words
    that i thought would be for you
    as they come out they're not the truth
    not the right words
    no, not the right words

    chorus:
    so confused so so down
    doesn't seem to be right
    can't put my finger on it
    can't even start up again
    so confused so so down
    whatever happened to me?
    that's what I'm wondering


    falling over feeling wrong
    so long my love
    so long again
    there's not a sound
    how long will this last?
    became a crowd
    a part of it
    apart again, yeah


    bridge:

    so listen, this is what happened
    it was the power of suggestion
    disguise this love that keeps me wanting
    it's gonna come back so hold it like this
    tell him yeah
    tell him yeah
    you are the one
    you are the one
    i'll be your love slave
    did you hear what i said
    i'll be your love slave
    you get me lost anyway
    if you're lost or found-yeah,yeah,yeah
    this is the only way
    i'll kiss your feet oh yeah baby
    i'll listen to all that you say
    you heard me right,
    i'll be your love slave
    yes, the others don't know how
    to worship
    you know, the other way is not working
    i really don't care
    i really don't care
    i really don't care
    you are the god of f@ck anyway
    i have become your love slave




    Submitted on 2006-03-20 00:42:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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