I liked the poem especially the repetition aspect of it. But it was a little long winded. If it was cut down by a few stanzas then i think this would be a very commendable piece of work. There was a good sense of feeling throughout whihc is the main reason i enjoyed it so much.
I used to be the same way exactly as the girl in the poem. It was written well, and it seems written from the heart. I wish there wasn't so much of that stuff going on now, but there is, and people do write to express their feelings.