Wow! I agree with so much of the philosophy in your writing... I believe in the Infinite One, much like you described: "total complete togetherness in everything", "peace is All in everything and everywhere", and "Love is Infinite...". But why don't you have a care? I LOVE the hands and fingers being the roots! And about thoughts released and free, moving and floating... I think you know this, but nirvana exists throughout it All, including now, this Nature as our present, but becomes more formless and pure when we die and reunite with our Source which is the Existence of All, because Everything is a form of God i think...
I have to say there is a beauty in the way you've written nature into this one. when we forget ourselves, and stop worrying about what we'll get next, the whole thing just seems to flow. It seems harder now that we're conditioned in America to either want or expect something all the time.
Love is now and it's real. I'm sending mine, hope you had a good time on your trip.
Tiff, this is what I expect fom you, yet there is a little bit more in here.
By personifying Nirvana, AND using the first person, this goes a bit further than your "IT" pieces, and shows a radiance that maybe hasn't come through with as much light before, because it certainly hit me with this one.
welll yeah this is very nice ui enjoyed each line of this wiritng i like it one of the best writings i have been reading these weeks.. thanks for sharing .. and if you have time pleae take a loook to my writings ... have a ncie day and take care Victor
When I see the word "Nirvana" I think of heaven or some such peaceful place. This poem fits that description perfectly. It's a peaceful and lovely read that takes me to a place of joy. The love for life and all the beauty around us. After reading this.. I too, have not a care.
This is a nice nature poem! Even though it is classified as love, I read this one as a true love of life, finding that oneness with nature and really being a part of a much bigger picture. I like how you take various aspects of nature and describe yourself as a part of it. This is very creative and a wonderful springtime poem. The birth of a new season is upon us girl! YEAY! I sooooo love the springtime. All is coming to life and offers so much newness and enjoyment. Your poem has really got me in tune with this wonderful season, despite the fact that it is still friggin cold here! Good work. Take care.
My God this is so beautiful I truefully loved this I thought of this write as a beautiful lasting love relationship with Nature You have a way with your writes if definately making one want to reach out to those still in need of a friend I love that about your writes God Bless Ron
elegant, and tanquil. I'll be honest I originally opened it because, Nirvana's my favorite band. I like how you pieced it together, I wouldn't have thought of such a way, but it certainly makes it a lively read. Happy Equinox
This was certainly a cheerful poem. Wow, speaking of eternal happiness in connection with nature is always a sure way to lift the spirits of your readers and you did just that Tiff. Your simplicity and energy was very aboundant and wonderful. I think this was like a spring breeze to read. You did a good job with this one.