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    dots Submission Name: once upona time"rhyming story"dots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsonce upona time"rhyming story"dots

    two boys and one girl/
    the best of friends/
    on top of the world/
    and they collected their ends/
    had system setup/
    with no way to fail/
    see everyday they met up/
    at a quarter till 12/
    they was out hustlin
    no matter what they had to do/
    in the mid-night sky, they rustlin'/
    and fights within there was few/
    now they have money/
    but, greed took over/
    ain't it funny/
    even humble killas got a chip on they shoulder/

    Submitted on 2006-03-20 19:20:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      almost everybody has chips on their shoulders. sorry man i really didn't like this one. was it the story of a drug-dealing trio? it wasn't that good. u need to put more into it.
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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