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    dots Submission Name: Falling For Youdots
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    Author: juss_kriss
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 399/443/123
    Words: 268
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1662



    Description:
       UPDATE: This was about a crush I had one a guy, nothing more. I'm over him anyways, haha.


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    dotsFalling For Youdots
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    verse 1:

    my days are getting darker
    as a shadow creeps over my mind
    my heart is lost in darkness
    and there's no way outta this hell
    these nights are getting longer
    and i feel like going outta my mind
    how did i get stuck in this mess
    why were you there when i fell

    chorus:

    i tripped and i fell for you
    you caught me and i kissed you
    i know it was a big mistake
    for putting all these hearts at stake
    there's no need to call me foolish
    i know the damage caused by one kiss
    i can't help myself, i'm falling for you
    and i don't know what to do

    verse 2:

    i feel this getting stronger
    and i cannot hide it from you
    i can't stop this deep emotion
    there's no way i can turn back now
    what says no is getting weaker
    as i keep on getting closer to you
    why is love such a commotion
    why did you have to turn up now

    chorus

    verse 3:

    i can't help falling deeper
    and i have to say how i feel
    cause i'm feeling so much for you
    and my loyalty to her is wrecked
    the way back outta her grows steeper
    tell me do you feel how i feel
    is there a chance for me and you
    why did you have to be so perfect?

    chorus x2

    coda:

    i'm falling for you
    (i can't help myself)
    i'm falling for you
    (i can't help myself)
    and i don't know what to do




    Submitted on 2006-03-20 19:34:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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