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Never Forgotten Relationships


Author: Linkins_knot
ASL Info:    14/Male/Behind a Computer
Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 20 /46 /19
Words: 200
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 926
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 1185



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I was feeling depresed as usual and wrote this thinging about my girlfriend..


Never Forgotten Relationships



I’m always thinking of you
No matter what you do
I love you with all my soul and heart
Both would be trashed if our hearts were to depart
I’m always think of you
No matter what you do
Or what you’ve done
Just never run
Because I can’t find you
Then I can’t see you
But then again…
I’m always thinking of you
I’m a picture in your wallet that cannot be thrown away
I will always be in your hopes and dreams
You will always be in mine it seems…
But I still love you no matter what you do
You can leave me, but I will never leave you
But know this:

“Even if another day didn’t exist
Your buried inside my heart, I cannot resist
Not only I feel we were destined to meet
But you were the one that lifted me off of my feet”

I still have more to say
I just don’t know how to put it in a correct way
But this will always repeat
Even if you try to retreat
“It doesn’t matter what you do or what you say
Because I will always love you in everyway…”




Submitted on 2006-03-21 01:14:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awww this is very sweet! some grammar mistakes but i do that 2! hehe but its was very sweet! its a fav! i hope it works out with u and ur gf!
~akaila~
| Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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