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    dots Submission Name: We coulddots
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    Author: niloy
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 1/5/5
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 582
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 651



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    dotsWe coulddots
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    Today, the Earth rebels.
    screams out loud. Calling
    god to save.
    The flowers are dead-near.
    breathing hard with anxiety.
    Insects and the other animals
    try to make their way towards
    liberty. Failure makes them cry.
    We are alikely trying to esape
    from green, from pressures.
    We are also dieing because of the
    pollution in our minds.
    We are dead, to find our new
    destination.
    We could gift them a green palace.
    but we have given them a heaven of
    punishment and destruction.
    But we could, ................. .





    Submitted on 2006-03-21 01:51:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      different and unique. I really enjoyed this piece.
    very nice use of wording and descriptions. I would definetely love to see more of your work.
    Jules-
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by jules271 | [ Reply to This ]
      very different, very true. i like it.....it speaks to me through things i understand what of tomorrow? it sounds not so futuristic. keep going!
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by rtx2 | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this alot. liked that it had a different and complete topic that you usually dont see written about. nice descriptions. keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by devbru86 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i relly liked this and yeah i agree too i really like this write its a fav keep it up and id like to read more and its the truth
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by robbie | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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