I liked the poem very much, the expression seems perfectly depressed, with the reference to the colour grey. I think this is a very good piece of work despite being old and i woul like to here more from you.
Just work on that line spacing trust me. If the line spacing is off for just a moment it will throw the whole poem off. But I did like this poem. It is nicely written, I had to look for the rhythm thow. It caught my atention because I wrote a poem a long time ago with the same title. The funny thing is it sounded alot alike with the term of being trapped.
I know what you mean, "however" I had a rough childhood! I wish I could rewind time just once. The day my life went downwards! Anyways I can totally relate to this poem so I know where you're coming from! Keep up the excellent work, one comment down ALOT more 2 go (lol)