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    dots Submission Name: Bitterness & Tearsdots
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    Author: KelseyJo
    ASL Info:    14/F/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 15/13/12
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Rant/Death
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1287



    Description:
       Just this Sunday...Febuary 19, 2006...my friend Taylor was in a car wreck. The car rolled and Taylor flew out of the back windshield. He was dead before he hit the ground. How long does it take for the pain to go away, I want to know? Why did God let this happen?


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    You left so suddenly...
    where have you gone?
    I didn't say goodbye.
    You had a feeling,
    but I laughed at you.
    Why didn't I realize?
    I despise the day that science made the car.
    What were your last thoughts as you flew through the air?
    Did my face flash in your mind as you hit the ground?
    Do you stare down at me from heaven?
    Are you even there?
    Some say you didn't know God.
    Are you in Hell?
    I would give anything for just one last word.
    I can't do anything but cry.
    I miss you.
    What am I going to do without you?
    How will I go on?
    You wanted to die but you finally did.
    Were you even surprised?
    Am I the only thing that kept you here?
    Please come back.
    I still need you.
    Oh my God, the future look sblank without you.
    I will not let myself forget.
    We had everything.
    Though you were still unhappy.
    I didn't help, did I?
    God wasn't there, was He?
    Why have you been taken from me?
    Anger covers my hurt, my pain.
    Did God take you?
    Are you with Him?
    Or are you down below?
    If so, why didn't God stop that semi?




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      I kinda relate to this feeling of losing somebody near to a car accident cause even I've been there..The feelings of anger, hurt & bitterness had also enveloped me..I used to look at his picture & talk with it for hours..Sounds crazy? I know however with Time, I came to forgive..I came to believe God chooses to take those people who are nice at heart...Be strong & think of the good times..Atleast you have good memories..Thats the best we'll ever have...
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by jyots | [ Reply to This ]



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