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    Author: rtx2
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 7/2/4
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Just feeling angry about people killing themselves


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    That little stick [cigarette], it controls you
    It saps your energy,
    And its drugs flow through you
    You have no room left for love or life
    It consumes you and eats at you from within
    Your time is now riddled with so much strife.
    So you continue, as you see it no sin.

    In the hospital it dawns on you
    The pleasures it gave were but a few.
    Now what of your family and your friends?
    Look at what’s left when your life ends!
    It can never happen to me, you say
    As slowly they wheel your body away!




    Submitted on 2006-03-21 12:07:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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